Sunday, October 14, 2012

Pitch Live!

Title: DAEMARKIN

Genre: YA Fantasy

Word Count: 86,000


 

21 comments:

  1. Cool twist on Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde! I loved the way you edited the video together, too. Good luck!

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  2. Oooh sounds exciting! Great video, good luck :D

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  3. The video was edited extremely well & the concept is intriguing, although I wasn't entirely sure if the book is actually a different version of Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde, or if it just pays homage to it! Regardless, it sounds like an interesting twist. #26

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  4. Hi Rachel,

    I really liked your voice in this! It was low-key but very moody and gave me the chills as you set up the premise of your story. I think Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde with demons is a great mash-up! And it feels like there will be a lot of fighting within himself before the demon is finally unleashed at the end. And I love the anime art of the characters!

    Sounds awesome!

    John Krissilas, #40
    http://www.johnkrissilas.com/

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    1. I've been following you around the blogs apparently. Would have commented on yours but my browser wouldn't let me for some reason. Anyway thanks for the comment. And I loved the premise for your story as well.

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  5. Very clear and concise, with an intriguing premise. Sounds real goo. Love to read it! Best luck. #20 :))

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    1. Sorry, the premise sounds--good, not gooey. oops. =}

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  6. I'm a sucker for a good demon story. I like that you show his character growth through the pitch-from the outsider to member of the village to the savior. Sounds good!

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  7. Wow, intense! I wouldn't want to be that guy, that's for sure. Great conflict, and definitely a book I would pick up!

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  8. What a great concept, and I love how you put your video together! I love Jekyll and Hyde, and the demonic twist gives it an extra layer of trouble. :D

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  9. Very cool premise!!! I like your pitch a lot. Best of luck! #35

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  10. What a great video pitch! Love the way it looks and how you told the story- good luck!

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  11. Great pitch! I love the visuals! Good luck!

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  12. One of my favorites so far! Good job, sounds great!

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  13. Hi Rachel, love the video! Thanks a lot for your comment on mine, I added subtitles just like you suggested. Good luck!

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  14. Love the concept of a demon who can take him over because of the secrets he's keeping. So awesome!

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  15. Your final stakes - save himself or save others - is really well thought out and seems logical given all you've told us. Very cool premise.

    #32

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  16. One of my favorites so far. Good job!

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  17. Wonderful pitch! I choose you to continue to the agent round on my blog. ;)

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    1. Thanks, Brenda! And thanks for putting all of this together.

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  18. Ooooohhhhhhh.... I love this, esp the either-or of his choice at the end. So cool!

    And *does a little dance* Yay, #TeamDrake

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