The video was edited extremely well & the concept is intriguing, although I wasn't entirely sure if the book is actually a different version of Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde, or if it just pays homage to it! Regardless, it sounds like an interesting twist. #26
I really liked your voice in this! It was low-key but very moody and gave me the chills as you set up the premise of your story. I think Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde with demons is a great mash-up! And it feels like there will be a lot of fighting within himself before the demon is finally unleashed at the end. And I love the anime art of the characters!
I've been following you around the blogs apparently. Would have commented on yours but my browser wouldn't let me for some reason. Anyway thanks for the comment. And I loved the premise for your story as well.
I'm a sucker for a good demon story. I like that you show his character growth through the pitch-from the outsider to member of the village to the savior. Sounds good!
Cool twist on Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde! I loved the way you edited the video together, too. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteOooh sounds exciting! Great video, good luck :D
ReplyDeleteThe video was edited extremely well & the concept is intriguing, although I wasn't entirely sure if the book is actually a different version of Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde, or if it just pays homage to it! Regardless, it sounds like an interesting twist. #26
ReplyDeleteHi Rachel,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your voice in this! It was low-key but very moody and gave me the chills as you set up the premise of your story. I think Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde with demons is a great mash-up! And it feels like there will be a lot of fighting within himself before the demon is finally unleashed at the end. And I love the anime art of the characters!
Sounds awesome!
John Krissilas, #40
http://www.johnkrissilas.com/
I've been following you around the blogs apparently. Would have commented on yours but my browser wouldn't let me for some reason. Anyway thanks for the comment. And I loved the premise for your story as well.
DeleteVery clear and concise, with an intriguing premise. Sounds real goo. Love to read it! Best luck. #20 :))
ReplyDeleteSorry, the premise sounds--good, not gooey. oops. =}
DeleteI'm a sucker for a good demon story. I like that you show his character growth through the pitch-from the outsider to member of the village to the savior. Sounds good!
ReplyDeleteWow, intense! I wouldn't want to be that guy, that's for sure. Great conflict, and definitely a book I would pick up!
ReplyDeleteWhat a great concept, and I love how you put your video together! I love Jekyll and Hyde, and the demonic twist gives it an extra layer of trouble. :D
ReplyDeleteVery cool premise!!! I like your pitch a lot. Best of luck! #35
ReplyDeleteWhat a great video pitch! Love the way it looks and how you told the story- good luck!
ReplyDeleteGreat pitch! I love the visuals! Good luck!
ReplyDeleteOne of my favorites so far! Good job, sounds great!
ReplyDeleteHi Rachel, love the video! Thanks a lot for your comment on mine, I added subtitles just like you suggested. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteLove the concept of a demon who can take him over because of the secrets he's keeping. So awesome!
ReplyDeleteYour final stakes - save himself or save others - is really well thought out and seems logical given all you've told us. Very cool premise.
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One of my favorites so far. Good job!
ReplyDeleteWonderful pitch! I choose you to continue to the agent round on my blog. ;)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Brenda! And thanks for putting all of this together.
DeleteOoooohhhhhhh.... I love this, esp the either-or of his choice at the end. So cool!
ReplyDeleteAnd *does a little dance* Yay, #TeamDrake